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Too many long words.

 

Course I voted mate, it's a very good read.

 

 

[/b]Youre a pro writer I believe?

 

Btw, you can add nominees to the list. Much fun.

 

Ta.

 

I have written for a couple of publications, but I have never been paid as such, so professional might be pushing it a bit!

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Good read but imo you should consider changing the name and look if you want to be more popular - its a little too obscure as it is. Note the other three finalists all 'do what it says on the tin' - there is little doubt what they're about. A picture of a bloke most people dont recognise, even if they both heard and remember the story from 16 years ago and also know Ali Dia was George Weah's Cousin (George Weah who he? for anybody under 25), doesnt grab the casual browser. Just my opinion but something obvious along the lines of 'Saints Alive' illustrated by a picture of SMS silhouetted against setting sun might do. If you feel you cant change the name now then at least change the picture to something more instantly recognisable as 'Saints'

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Good read but imo you should consider changing the name and look if you want to be more popular - its a little too obscure as it is. Note the other three finalists all 'do what it says on the tin' - there is little doubt what they're about. A picture of a bloke most people dont recognise, even if they both heard and remember the story from 16 years ago and also know Ali Dia was George Weah's Cousin (George Weah who he? for anybody under 25), doesnt grab the casual browser. Just my opinion but something obvious along the lines of 'Saints Alive' illustrated by a picture of SMS silhouetted against setting sun might do.

 

Optimistic in England mate 3185450240_19f5e2426e.jpg

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