georgeweahscousin Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 .....school style. http://wp.me/p1mFFL-mF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanimal Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Brilliant work Goerge, a bit harsh on Geography I would have said C, and a definite B for Music given how the Headmaster credited the full school for joining in at assembly times!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minty Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 My favourite line: Ongoing arguments with nearest neighbour. We’ve had to separate them. Although I would perhaps have gone with: Nearest neighbour keeps trying to pick a fight, but the pupil has risen above this. 2 leagues above to be precise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alpine_saint Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 I enjoy your blogs very much and they are always an interesting read, but this one for me didnt quite hit the spot and wasnt up to your usual very high standard. Nice try though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CWD Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Haha very good. I enjoyed that. Just one thing though, and I'm sorry to nitpick, but footballs are spherical not cylindrical! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thedelldays Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 a great read as usual. we have some very good blogs on here, all different styles..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgeweahscousin Posted 10 May, 2012 Author Share Posted 10 May, 2012 I enjoy your blogs very much and they are always an interesting read, but this one for me didnt quite hit the spot and wasnt up to your usual very high standard. Nice try though I will work harder on the next one. Haha very good. I enjoyed that. Just one thing though, and I'm sorry to nitpick, but footballs are spherical not cylindrical! Haha, yeah I know. I've been picked up on it a couple of times already. E for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
norwaysaint Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Rickie Lambert defied the laws of Physics on more than one occasion with a staggering record of getting a cylindrical object into a guarded net with numerous variables. What was that then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minty Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 lol, good spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgeweahscousin Posted 10 May, 2012 Author Share Posted 10 May, 2012 What was that then? Right that's it I'm changing it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank's cousin Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Enjoyed it. B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sussexsaint Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Absolutely superb Chris, love the blogs - many thanks for these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNSUN Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Adam needs to curb the watersports, or he could end up in hot water. (Boom Tish) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gingeletiss Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Haha, yeah I know. I've been picked up on it a couple of times already. E for me. Watch that stuff, it can kill!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazlo78 Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Good read - thanks, Chris! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgeweahscousin Posted 10 May, 2012 Author Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Thanks for all the nice comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ohio Saint Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Creative Writing George has done very well this year. Many of his articles have been well composed, informative and intelligent. He sometimes goes off on a comedic tangent, which is always welcome. While his style has often been lighthearted, he may well find the class a lot more difficult next term, so I would not be surprised to see a more morose tone to his writing in the future. A+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armitage Shanks Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 I enjoy your blogs very much and they are always an interesting read, but this one for me didnt quite hit the spot and wasnt up to your usual very high standard. Nice try though I bet George is devastated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steeleye Saint Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Brilliant stuff George - really enjoyed it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamilton Saint Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Interesting read. Based on the individual marks, you should have the overall mark as a B, not an A! IMHO, of course! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
It's There Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Ofsted would say it's requiring improvement...because they can't read anything positive into anything...but I'd give you a straight A ! Loved the Pompey jibe! Many thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxstone Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Top Man - Enjoyed that very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgeweahscousin Posted 10 May, 2012 Author Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Creative Writing George has done very well this year. Many of his articles have been well composed, informative and intelligent. He sometimes goes off on a comedic tangent, which is always welcome. While his style has often been lighthearted, he may well find the class a lot more difficult next term, so I would not be surprised to see a more morose tone to his writing in the future. A+ Too kind! I bet George is devastated. I treat all feedback with equal disdain Brilliant stuff George - really enjoyed it! Merci. Interesting read. Based on the individual marks, you should have the overall mark as a B, not an A! IMHO, of course! I was maybe being a bit generous. Ofsted would say it's requiring improvement...because they can't read anything positive into anything...but I'd give you a straight A ! Loved the Pompey jibe! Many thanks! Cheers! Top Man - Enjoyed that very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miffy Posted 10 May, 2012 Share Posted 10 May, 2012 Great read. Top of the class! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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