Football Blog.

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Getting some practice in for a career in sports journalism.

 

So here is first blog, excuse the domain;

 

http://footballmatterz.blogspot.com/

 

Any feedback would be highly appreciated, thanks.

[tpbury]

I know nothing about sports journalism, but have read quite a lot. First of all, good for you, it must take a bit of balls to expose your work to a bunch of strangers - so good on.

 

I think it's a bit over crafted and doesn't flow all that well, then I thought it was similar to an insert piece within a big Sun article, and if that were the case, then it it's a great start. If you get any grief about it, just think (as I'm sure you do), that this a first step and you've lost nothing for doing it.

 

Make sure you keep Saints in the news!

 

T.

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yeah first one so lots of improvment but feedback is always very useful so thanks very much.

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a new article for anyone interested.

 

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[Andy_Porter]

Looking good mate.

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one for last nights game.

 

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[Andy_Porter]

Nice article, better than the first two.

 

Still no mentions of Southampton! There better be a decent article on the 29th of March after we win the jpt

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there will be without doubt. Need to do some Football League stuff, but only one game can surely take the headlines today

 

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[saint-luco]

there will be without doubt. Need to do some Football League stuff, but only one game can surely take the headlines today

 

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nope followed the link and dont wanna read it

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football league article as promised. feel free to add to discussion and vote on polls

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wage cap should there be one?

 

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contraversy in Bayern game, a referee not to be forgotten

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[Mase]

contraversy in Bayern game, a referee not to be forgotten

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I see Klose scored in the 89th minute and was 6 yards offside... Well bad!!

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time for Ronaldinho to re-emerge?

 

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a little match report from La Liga's game between Atletico and La Coruna

 

and a saints one in the archives

 

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